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Wednesday, November 21, 2018

The Girls Perspective

For this writing task we had to write about the Music video over the song happier as if we were either the do or the girl.  I chose to write about the girls life. 

The Girls Perspective


It was mt birthday and I was sitting at the dining room table. All my friends and other guests running around screaming and playing with balloons. Someone brought out my cake and it was the first feeling of delight I've had all day. I thought of a wish and took a deep breath, But then a girl run up beside me and blew them out. I was frustrated and very sad. A singular tear was rolling down my face, all i could do was sit there and wipe it off. Family members started giving me gifts, and my first one was a yellow bow. I Put it back in the box for safe keeping and put the lid back on. Then a new positive chapter of my life started as the same family member walked out with a golden retriever puppy!  I was so happy, I didn't know what to say. I called him Mello. I was still in shock, he was so fluffy and he was licking my face With his warm slobbery tongue and i patted him as well. My family member took a photo of Mello and I and put it on the shelf.  As time went by I would get measured by the wall and i would measure Mello as well. I loved Mello so much. All of mellos stuff would get larger and larger and he would gain more and more toys to keep him interested while i'm at school. I was all grown up and i was at senior school. One of my classes was physical education (P.E) And we were playing Football (soccer).  I was the last one on the bench. No one wanted to pick me.  So when i got home i would practice and practice with Mello and work on my skill and technique and he would be getting exercise as well. That following day at P.E We were taking a class photo. One of my classmates kicked me out of the front row so then she could be the star of the photo so I had to stand at the back.  We were getting ready to take the photo, the photographer told everyone to smile. But when I did they all laughed and made fun of me because of my braces.

I thought this was a really good task because it got us thinking about the task and about the reading. I really enjoyed this task because it was full of different challenges like deciding on how the characters were feeling at the time and trying to write in first person. 

1 comment:

  1. Cool reflection Aiden. I love the way you worked so hard in class and my favourite part was how you added in the dog's name and the breed, you mentioned you did some research for this.

    I am glad that you liked this task, I thought it might be a fun way to try another type of Narrative writing.

    - Miss Birtch

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