This is our explication writing that we did on scooters. half of us was with scooters and the other half was against scooters. this is what I writ.
Dear Mr Sutton
In my opinion, we should not be able to use scooters at Hornby High School because it is to dangerous for other people at morning tea and lunchtime. That do or don’t have scooters incase you hit them. Don’t you have the feeling that scootering around the school is really dangerous?
Also Your scooter might even get stolen as well and There's no rume to put them in class.
The main reason that we shouldn’t have scooters at school is because there are too many hazards like the redevelopment, with all of the construction going on, there are also lot’s of stones on the paths around the school. If you think of it, there is also a pretty massive chance that you will Crash into other students with or without scooters aswell, because you might be racing someone or you might also be having a game of S,C,O,O,T which is a game where you do a trick and then the other person has to do the same trick and you take turns in that game you might get really hurt.
The second reason is there is no where to put them when you get to class. Even if you do put them in class, there will be no rume and you might get too distracted by them when you are trying to do your work. Like if you are in science, and you are doing an experiment and you might get distracted and you might get distracted and put the wrong thing in and it explodes. Also there is a high safety hazard, in case there is a fire and you will need to get out fast, you might trip over the scooters and injure yourself.
The last point is that you might have your scooter get stolen by other students that would probably be jellicious of it. Also students that you didn’t let them have a go. Your scooter might also be a really expensive. For example you are doing tricks and another student wants a turn and you don’t let them and then you let your friend have a turn, then they might get a little jellicious and they might take it too have a turn. Also you might forget it in class if you take it too class, and then someone might claim it as theres. After they have stolen it they will probably take it home and change the parts and then you won’t recognize it as yours.
I Think Hornby High school should not have scooters because it is to dangerous and there are too many risks that your scooter will be stolen, you might hurt someone or you might fall off because of the construction.
This is why I don’t think scooters should be used at Horny High School.
Thank You for reading my opinion,
From Aiden
