Thursday, June 7, 2018
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Hi Aiden!
ReplyDeleteI think you did a really nice job about recounting the story we read. I like how you created you and your 'me me' with different coloured eyes, just like the Me Me in the story.
A helpful note for next time would be to make sure you are proofreading your final copy before you post your work to your blog. You have some strange capital letters popping up in your sentences!
- Miss Birtch