Hey Adien, I think you should make your font size a bit bigger it was a little bit hard to read so also you should highlight the font in white so it is clear
Good Job Aiden!,I really like the way you have worded your project. Maybe next time you could include more photos. This project was executed very well and I can see you did this to the best of your abilities
I like how you chose to do a Piktochart for your DLO. You used your explanation writing skills when completing this work, even though it was for Maths! I like how you were able to tie those learning areas together.
For next time you could include a copy of your calculations and how much each item would cost to really share the Maths side of this with your audience.
Hi Aiden, I really like the pet you chose because you knew how much it would cost, what it needed and it was only small. I like how you explained what it would need and how much the cost is. How did you cut down the cost of the money?
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Hey Aiden, Izzy here. I love how you have worded this post. I really like how you have put in the weekly and monthly costs. keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteHey Adien,
ReplyDeleteI think you should make your font size a bit bigger it was a little bit hard to read so also you should highlight the font in white so it is clear
Hey Aiden, Izzy here. I love how you have worded this post. I really like how you have put in the weekly and monthly costs. keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteGood Job Aiden!,I really like the way you have worded your project. Maybe next time you could include more photos. This project was executed very well and I can see you did this to the best of your abilities
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Hi Aiden
ReplyDeleteI like how you chose to do a Piktochart for your DLO. You used your explanation writing skills when completing this work, even though it was for Maths! I like how you were able to tie those learning areas together.
For next time you could include a copy of your calculations and how much each item would cost to really share the Maths side of this with your audience.
Well done overall!
- Miss Birtch
Hi Aiden,
ReplyDeleteI really like the pet you chose because you knew how much it would cost, what it needed and it was only small. I like how you explained what it would need and how much the cost is. How did you cut down the cost of the money?