Today for writing we were doing persuasive writing. before we started writing, my teacher asked the class to do 10 minutes of free writing to get us warmed up before we started the lesson. here is what i wrote.
Once upon a time, there was a rock. It was grey and and round and it was really rocky. It was a hard rock and i called it rock. Rock sat on the beach, well he didn't really have a choice. He sat there for hours, days, months, years until the day he was grounded up and turned into sand. Now sand is Yellow and small. He was very sandy. He is very soft. I called him sand. Sand couldn't do much apart from sit there for hours, days, months, years until the day he got compressed into a rock again.
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