For cyber smart we have been making a presentation on some issues we have with online blogs. this is what kalim and i have made.
I hope you have been taking in this advice and what is your opinion on this presentation.
Tuesday, September 11, 2018
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Kia ora Aiden. I wonder about your thoughts on this DLO. Did you think that within the amount of time you were given that this is Year 8 quality work? Your group was given a challenge by Miss Morgan to help create a resource for her when she teaches younger students and you had some really great ideas about the type of language and images to include, but I don't see them throughout this DLO.
ReplyDeleteIf you were able to fix this up and make some changes, what do you think you and Kalim could do to improve? I will subscribe to your post and I look forward to reading your response.
- Miss Birtch
Hi Aiden, I like the way you explain your DLO. Maybe next time you could spend more time editing your slide.
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ReplyDeleteHello, I really like how you have add punctuation and detail to your post. It is good how you have add colour to the background. Maybe you could add images and links to make your work stand out more?
ReplyDeleteHi Adien,
ReplyDeleteWe noticed 2 spelling errors
on slide 2 and 3
you should go back and fix the errors
Next time you should add images
and take your time
Do you think a different colored backgrounds on the slides would look good?
-Lucy and Alex