For cyber smart we have been making a presentation on some issues we have with online blogs. this is what kalim and i have made.
I hope you have been taking in this advice and what is your opinion on this presentation.
Tuesday, September 11, 2018
3 comments:
Comments
Please structure your comments as follows:
Positive - Something done well
Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Note: Only a member of this blog may post a comment.
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
Kia ora Aiden. I wonder about your thoughts on this DLO. Did you think that within the amount of time you were given that this is Year 8 quality work? Your group was given a challenge by Miss Morgan to help create a resource for her when she teaches younger students and you had some really great ideas about the type of language and images to include, but I don't see them throughout this DLO.
ReplyDeleteIf you were able to fix this up and make some changes, what do you think you and Kalim could do to improve? I will subscribe to your post and I look forward to reading your response.
- Miss Birtch
This comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDeleteHi Adien,
ReplyDeleteWe noticed 2 spelling errors
on slide 2 and 3
you should go back and fix the errors
Next time you should add images
and take your time
Do you think a different colored backgrounds on the slides would look good?
-Lucy and Alex