In English today we had two different options about what we could do. We could either write about what we did in the holidays or we could write a made up story using a card with a picture on it and a challenge card. The picture i got was some trees on fire and the challenge card i got was a tricky structure card. The tricky structure card insisted on me starting a sentence with the final word of the last sentence. Here is the story have written.
Once upon a time there lived a cat named cat. Cat was Living in a remote house on a hill with another cat. Cat the cat and her roommate the cat were cooking and then they lagged and there house caught on fire. FIRE FIRE! They Screeched as they were trapped in their house and all of the forestry behind them. As the quiet lovely hillside behind them burst into a gigantic ball of fire, Cat the cat and her roommate the cat were left for dead.
Hello Aiden!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed seeing some cool creative writing from you, especially because it was about cats. I wonder if you could have included an image or even created one to go along with the story you were telling.
Also, remember capitals on your I's!!!
- Miss Birtch