Last week we watched a video of a chimp that got sent to space. This is a plan of my narrative that I am going to write. Hope you enjoy!
This is in two corporate parts because it is too long.
Monday, August 1, 2016
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Aiden your work is astounding. I like the way you show your liking for E.T, I saw some spelling mistake's that should be checked, other than that its intriguing. How many times did you watch E.T ?
ReplyDeleteThis is a great plan Aiden with lots of detail. I look forward to reading your story. I would love to similes and metaphors to describe the setting.
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