Where's E.T First Draft

For the last few weeks we have been making a story about a space chimp, we have been working in groups and we have been working together to make the story better, I hope you enjoy!

WHERE’S E.T?

YAY! I finally get to go where no other chimp has gone…   Space the beautiful paradise. I've just finished my last training, now I have to get ready in my space suit. I say good bye to everyone and jump into the space ship.  There is silence and then I hear 5. 4. 3. 2. 1. I am wondering what that is for and then I get pushed back in my seat. I yell in chimp voice, “I can fly OU OU AA". I snuck a picture of my trainer (Egbert) into the ship and I have a picture of who I have to find, E.T. My ship snapped in half as I hit the atmosphere. I radio-called the control tower to tell them, I was ok, They start jumping with joy and they tell the others. They all start cheering. It is a beautiful sight. O wait I I fell sleepy, it it must have been the drink I had. Oh Oh I feel nauseous how am I meant to survive for 65 years. Goo good night…

It has been 65 years, I am finally awake. Nothing bad has happened I am safe. I can see the beauty of space as I float past, it is beautiful and if I did die this would be the place to. Wait what is that in the distance? I think, I think it’s E.T, I peer down at the photo of E.T. I I can’t believe it, I actually found him . I can see my beautiful home planet in the distance as well, EARTH, “Mother, I’m coming home yahoo”!

The shuttle is shaking like crazy, I must be going through the atmosphere. Everything is rushing through my mind and past me. The sight is amazing from above but when I landed in Texas.

my mind was thrown. Terra firma!

The sight was ridiculous, when I saw it, I was disgusted. It is so bad that I Can't explain it, it is destroyed, there is rubble everywhere, smashed buildings and everything is grey and disgusting. I looked behind me, my space shuttle is DESTROYED and ugly the fuel tank is leaking. But there is nothing duct tape can’t fix.

Then all of the emotions hit me, “Where is my mom and Egbert”? (my trainer),

I fell to my knees in disappointment. “Where could they be”?  I go and get my picture of Egbert. As I picked it up I got shot from behind,BANG!!...

I wake up and all I hear is an ear piercing beeping noise, BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP. I look around and all I see are tools like a hammer, saw and nails, and an alarm clock I must be in a shed, a supply shed.

I get up and walk around, I feel really weak, I find a piece of wood and use it as a walking stick. I walk out of the shed and I look around to find out where I am.

It it looks like my backyard, I look inside the window and see blue people, people like on Eldora as I floated past in the shuttle. That is where I found E.T.

I peak in the window again and then I see Egbert.  I think to myself and say that can’t be, so I walk inside and I see Egbert.

"Egbert you are so old and wrinkly but you look in good shape".

“But But where are the blue people”.

“Don’t worry It was just a Movie”

Avatar!

THE END