Persuasive Letter Writing

Here is my writing. this term we were learning about persuasive writing, so our goal was to write a letter to someone about a problem we have had here is what I writ.

Aiden Clemett                            

180 Waterloo Road

Friday 30th june 2017        

Rachael Clemett-Denton

3 Amuri Street  

Hei Hei

Dear: Mum

I am writing this letter Because, Bryce is really annoying and I want him to stop but he won’t listen to me. Can you do something about it?

I feel frustrated at Bryce when he is doing all of these three things below, Separately or together.3

• 1: He doesn’t listen because he has his chromebook sound too high or he just doesn’t listen in the first place.

• 2: Bryce will just keep asking for something until he gets it or he will go off and throw a big tantrum.
• 3: If I tell him something to help him when he has been told off he will yell at me, punch me or like in the first thing, he won’t listen.

I will explain it in more detail further down the page.

P1: My first reason. Bryce will never listen. Sometimes he can’t hear us because he has his chromebook volume up or he is too addicted to it. Or Bryce just doesn’t want to listen because he is annoying me or he is trying to get attention. The last thing for this reason is that when ever he is carrying Thomas my little brother around and he holds Thomas in awkward ways and he hurts him, but he won’t listen to me and put him down because he wants to do it himself. This is one of the things I want him to stop.

P2: Reason 2! Bryce is that kind of person that he will ask for something until he gets it. Sometimes he acts like a spoilt kid but when he doesn’t get what he wants he will throw a tantrum and cry about it, or he won’t communicate with us for like an hour. Bryce can be a pain but when he get’s told off we all get the punishment because bryce lies so he can get it his way, so you guys believe him as well as me so we both get in trouble.

This is something that really annoys me.

P3: Reason 3! After we all get told off I try to give him some information about what he could do so he doesn’t get told off as much or at all. But like in the first paragraph, he doesn’t listen, he tries to punch me or hurt me in any way or he yells at me and then I get in trouble for apparently doing something to annoy him. If he hurt me he only gets in even more trouble and gets told to stay in the room for longer.  If bryce would listen to me he might even get further in life. So please help me sort out his attitude.

Therefore I have a strong opinion about Bryce.  As we all know that he doesn’t listen because of his chromebook. He will always ask for something until he gets it, and he get’s told off too much. So hopefully you can help me make this change too his attitude after you read this.

Your sincerely: Aiden