Kia ora Aiden. I love the way you chose to display your explanation writing about waves on a beautiful underwater background. It is very eye catching. I look forward to reading your next piece. Good on you for making the correct changes to improve your final piece of writing. Keep up the excellent work. - Miss Birtch
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Kia ora Aiden. I love the way you chose to display your explanation writing about waves on a beautiful underwater background. It is very eye catching. I look forward to reading your next piece. Good on you for making the correct changes to improve your final piece of writing. Keep up the excellent work.
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