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Monday, November 12, 2018

Omaka History

For my final EOTC activity, I wanted to find out the history of the Omaka Scout Camp. We were given a reading all about the history of the camp that we could read off of and write it into our own words. Here is what I Have written about the history.

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  1. Kia ora Aiden

    I really like how you made a mention of using your own words for your timeline. That is really important. I also like that you chose to write your timeline more formally in a paragraph, rather than creating a timeline with only a little bit of information.

    You put in some great effort. Just be sure you are checking where your capital letters are, I don't want to see them popping up in the middle of a sentence. See if you can catch where I am meaning.

    - Miss Birtch

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