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Monday, November 5, 2018

Cat's & Dog's

Cat's and dog's, they are two of the most favorite pets in the world. But what if you could only pick one? 

I would pick a dog, because they are so fun and energetic. They are so good for your physical exercise and they are a great fetch companion. A lot of dog's need lot's of exercise and you can do that by walking them, taking them to the park or even letting them out the back yard for a run. This is where they help with your exercise. I really favor dog's because they can be really fluffy and some of them are really fun. A lot of dog's love pats and they can be really gentle around younger family members.  Dogs are so cute and they can eat remainder food that you don't. 

Cat's kill birds and rats and then they bring them inside. Cat's can also run away and have kids and then you have a handful of them. Cats are really lazy and don't do much. But with dogs you can keep them in an enclosed area and they wont be able to get out in a hurry. 

Dogs can do many different things. You can take them hunting or on a bush walk and they really enjoy that. You can Keep it as a house dog for family. You can teach your dogs to do tricks. You can also teach your dog to heard sheep. But cats cant do any of that cool stuff. cats just lay down, get their fur everywhere, and just cause chaos. Dogs are much more fun and can do so many more things. But whats your opinion on these two animals? 

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Aiden!

    It looks like your peer didn't get a comment up today, so I figured I would leave you some pointers for your persuasive writing.

    * I like the deliberate words you choose to add interest to your sentences
    * you are using great 'formal' language for your intended audience
    * sentences should not start with the word but. 'But' is a connecting word to join ideas, not a sentences starter

    I hope these two positives, and one helpful comment will influence your next piece of writing.

    - Miss Birtch

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